breaking free...


Karate


Just one blow
meticulously measured
real feng shui

and I was free

but Life was shrewd

new fences were built
I blew them away
secretly

but Life...





Poetry by Caprice
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Written on 2009-04-11 at 20:40

Tags Karate  Fence  Free 

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Well, life ... you have to watch it all the time, don't you? Breaking free is an ongoing achievement..

This text is a real gem - and not one superfluous word I think. Just perfect!
2009-04-13



Try ki-aikido... Catching the adversary's force, and elegantly turn it against him ;)
2009-04-12


TonyD
Nice structure in this poem. Each stanza is like a kata: elegant and purposeful.
2009-04-12


Eli The PoetBay support member heart!
Yes; brilliant....
2009-04-12


ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
I agree , your work is superb

Ken ( D Williams )
2009-04-12