I was inspired by a fellow poet this morning.....You know who you are, Thank you!!!!!


Morning Rose

Dance
new
upon the dew of the morning,
sing
to the blossom of the
morning rose
sweet flowing scents perfume my soul
and I
bathe in your
waters warm
kiss.




Poetry by LurieJune
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Written on 2005-07-13 at 15:53

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Danny...
The imagery is so sweet and delicate...I just adore this piece...!

:)
2005-10-15


R.K.Singh
It's a lovely lycric, with touching haiku sense; just you needed to divide the poem into 3-line stanzas.?
R K
2005-07-22


F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
this is definitely nice... felt like i was in the cool, fresh new air of the day... morning, alone without anything to obstruct the beauty, the peace and quiet of it all... i imagine everyone still sleeping and me just taking it all in, relaxed by myself on the porch or something, just breathing in the serene atmosphere... thats what your words prompt in me this afternoon... very poetic expression... makes me float in peaceful rÍveries :) thanks for sharing :)

later...xx
2005-07-13


StillHoppin The PoetBay support member heart!
makes me want to take a deep breath of morning air, and smile as the day unfolds, full of possibilities... now i feel poetic! :) thanks,

~me
2005-07-13


chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
arr the morning, sweet and beautiful - grabs a cover and dives under, sounds of snoring echoing :D
2005-07-13