hopefully in the spirit of Haiku - nature, and a (sort of) new thought at the end - i.e. the blue of the bluebells reflect the sky/heaven, plus the daydreams are reflections


Haiku

Woodland in April
Daydreams amid bright bluebells
Heaven's reflection




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Written on 2009-04-18 at 13:28

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Kathy Lockhart
a lovely light and refreshing haiku. : ) kathy
2009-04-23


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2009-04-22



I do adore woodlands, bluebells and the spring and you have put them together in one of my favourite forms so beautifully,

Thanks for reminding me of heaven's reflections. A lovely refreshing haiku.

Smiling at you

Tai
2009-04-18


Rob Graber
That's "playing the words" nicely (as Robert Frost put it)!
2009-04-18


melanie sue
This is beautiful, Marie, and a real pleasure to read. This is one poem where no one can dispute the truth within the words!
2009-04-18