Dog afternoon


It is a breathtaking, floriferous feast
that meets the weary eye
with multitudes of shifting tones
a sodden, shiny green day that gleams
on a late rainy afternoon
the dog is more fond of
than I am, at first.




Poetry by Bob
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Written on 2009-06-02 at 20:27

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Esti D-G
Why only two commas? Surely either all or none? But that's your perogative and poetic licence,my friend!
luv estix
2009-06-05


Esti D-G
Bookmarked for your beautiful use of words.
luvestix
2009-06-05