I saw...

I woke up a beautiful day
and tried to throw
my black veil
way behind me.

I saw
beaches gathering forgotten dreams
kids playing with their little toys
all those I have never seen
all those I never dared to feel
lay bare before my eyes.

I saw
a neighbor smiling sweetly at me
two hands waving good morning
another sunny day
passing my way
leaving a dust of joy
leaving a carpet of flowers.

I saw
the world differently
the people standing beside me
but not anymore maliciously
I saw
I saw
I felt...
I saw...




Poetry by Eva
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Written on 2009-06-19 at 00:18

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Malin Johansson
This was a very nice poem!
It's very vivid and it really made me think to open up our eyes and take in as much beauty as we can!
really liked this part:
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I saw
a neighbor smiling sweetly at me
two hands waving good morning
another sunny day
passing my way
leaving a dust of joy
leaving a carpet of flowers.

//Malin
2009-06-19



It is good when your eyes start seeing and your heart starts feeling the good that does exist out there in this world.....I hope you keep that sight, Eva.
2009-06-19