in the ether
there is a chemical
it was strong in me
when I was born
I tasted this sensation
till the early strains
of conciousness
began slowly taking it away
and for years
I would wonder
what this feeling was
it was something that I did not want to describe
as indescribable
so lately
this feeling
this ethereal déjà vu
has been returning
and I wonder
do you feel it too?

Poetry by Eli The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2009-07-21 at 06:56

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J. E.
This makes me think. You describe something which I am pretty sure I have felt. It's a sense of nostalgia so strong, it can bring tears down my chin. Thank you for this!

A most interesting and intriguing piece of poetry... engaging as it conjures up possibilities for that which is ethereal! loved it!

A very good descriptive poem which makes the reader wonder and think about this Ethereal. Very good poen here

Mmmm, I feel it! Nice description of the indescribable.