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Danielle SP Glasgow


You say I say

You say you can never love me
I say your afraid, pushing me away
You say its getting too serious
I say your getting scared of your feelings


I say I'm leaving you
You say you care too much about me to see me go
I say this is going no-where
You say you want it to go somewhere



To live a life full of fun
You need to want it
To have someone love you
You need to let them in


Let your guard down
Say how you really feel
Take my hand
Embrace my love
You be you
And ill be me



Poetry by danielle289
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Written on 2009-07-29 at 15:45

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Achernar
A wonderful lover's lament that way too many of us can most readily and easily identify with.... very well done. Loved it!!!
2009-09-02


Eli The PoetBay support member heart!
The last two lines represent a poem on their own and indeed encompass all that is ever required - but of course, life is not that simple. Lucky for that, other wise no one would be writing. :)

Thanks for sharing these intimate thoughts.
2009-07-29