"speaking words of wisdom, 'Let it be.'"




Up the Creek Without a Paddle

Write the write of Christian might
and get a fight from left or right. 
Though offensive it may not be
to those who choose to believe,
it causes some, without a faith,
to crudely answer with words of hate.
Now you do your thing and I'll do mine:
I'll not censor your doubts about Jesus and the wine
While you dare to stop the poetry of things Divine.





Poetry by Kathy Lockhart The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2009-08-15 at 01:48

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Thomas Perdue The PoetBay support member heart!
I like Sid's comment. That's really where things get messed up: intolerance of others' beliefs. I've been exposed to a lot of different belief systems, and considered different things, so I have to be able to have some tolerance for other belief systems, and in many cases, I even have a deep love and fascination with different belief systems!

I think this is what we really need: to get the religions of the world to respect one another, come together and study together. I think a lot of people could learn respect for others' beliefs like this, and we really need that in the world now: there are a lot of people who, like you say in your poem, take offense in other belief systems (yes, I know you are talking about Christianity in your poem, but it can be applied to any belief system).

Overall, nice write, good job!
Hope you're well,
T.
2009-08-17


Sid Gardner
Everyone has beliefs whether it be a creed, a supreme being, or just how they conduct theselves on this earth.
The poison lies in the intollerance of others views.
Good thought provoking write well crafted.
Just my view.
Sid .
2009-08-17


Charlie
Nice sentiments, and very true. I really like the rhyme. Everyone has the right to write about what they believe, or do not believe in without negative judgement from others. Charlie.
2009-08-15


jenks The PoetBay support member heart!
burp!
2009-08-15


Phyllis J. Rhodes
This gets a church full of Amens!!!!
2009-08-15