A satiric poem. Can you guess what it is satirizing?


Capitulation

Alas! Today's the day it's true; I am my own man.
Independence is my sword to slice conformity's chain.
A set of steps. I've paved my way with very solid plans
From which I do not dare to err. I'll never join this train.

A world of lies. A globe of hatred, of which I'll have no part.
Yet one exception—to be accepted—a devilish work of art.
I wish to please so I may join. Oh great society!
I am your slave. You are my god. I show you piety.
To please your wish, I give myself, oh great civilization!
After all, my plans scarce err, the mildest aberration.

All I wish is confirmation as member of this group.
The slightest change, in viscous plans, so I don't seem a goop.
A tweak adjustment in my steps could cause nobody harm
Yet disregard of others' thoughts will cause more than alarm.

I speak to you in passive tone. I still am my own man.
I simply wish to indulge peers, my own modified plan.
I am not changed. I am myself, in more flexible form.
My liquid plans, they give me room, yet still I don't conform.

Jump off this bridge? To make you laugh? You'll better be my friend?
Not something that I'd often do, yet your wish is my command.




Poetry by Ammad Khokar
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Written on 2009-10-02 at 01:18

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I like it, I like it muchly.

Well done, I guess it is satirizing your freedom of mind

Smiling at you

Tai
2009-12-02