Love is a fire

Love is a fire

that takes you higher

and higher

When in this flame

a mind is cast

left is the essence

that will forever last.





Poetry by Nils Teodor The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2009-10-02 at 22:42

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night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
aaah lovely written! :) *applause*
2009-10-04


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2009-10-04



Such a mysterious emotion love is,
and so so hot are her flames...

I am enjoying your work very much. Succinct and close to the heart of humanity...

Smiling at you

Tai
2009-10-02



Love is a fire,,like that but be careful you can get a nasty burn! and can flare up and turn into a nasty rash:P lovely write

cyndi
2009-10-02