a rather common syndrome, I am afraid...


The loss of love



You carry on in spite of all
with all your duties, businesses and burdens,
straining constantly against the wind
in never-ending ever steeper up-hill
trying to survive
and to forget your losses,
but you can not do without them.
They are always there, reminding you
of how it was when once you had it all,
the whole world and no worries,
just because you had someone to love.
There is no compensation for that loss,
no workoholism, no obsession will suffice
to make up for that emptiness;
and all you can do is to struggle on
and cry at times for all that nothing that you got
as a reward for all your sufferings,
while none of all your losses
ever was intentional, deserved or fair.





Poetry by Christian Lanciai The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2010-02-06 at 12:30

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:) thank u for the smile and the tear u have brought to my AND my heart and my soul.

amazing writing and only words of experience is what my eyes saw. cuz only those who have touched fire, can speeak fire.

love not only fil the emptiness we have..but heals our pain in a way we wont ever think about what did hurt in the 1st place..and losing a love..is losing a soul...yet we never cant not live ..we just some times get stuck between death and reality...

gr8 work
keep that up
bookmarked**
2010-02-10


jenks The PoetBay support member heart!
i forget who first said "pain is the price we pay for love" but they were a truth speaker ;)
i think we have to go through the pain to find a real peace within ourselves.
bookmarked because as usual your write is good.
2010-02-06



I can but agree with the thoughts gleaned from this striking poem. Reminds me too of an early Sophia Loren film, 'The Sunflower' in which the main title theme is called 'The Loss of Love.'
2010-02-06