So easy you forget

You forget I was your shoulder –every time you cried

You forget who made you want to life -when you felt to die

You forget the not good enough-was the best a week ago

You forget I was there for you -when no one else would show

You forget that one day you'll miss me-and I might no longer be

You forget that most of the time-the best things in life are free

You forget that everyday I'm gone-you'll wish I begged to stay

But you'll remember that you're the one who wanted me to go away




Poetry by nature
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Written on 2010-02-10 at 07:10

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Damon
This is an excellent piece of writing. I love it. Damon
2010-02-14



HollY! :) that was amazing !
and flowed in a very amazing way...

ull find many ppl who will relate to this..but this how you expressed it is so unique..book marked..applz..


gr8 words..deep emotions
2010-02-13


Holly Andrews
wow thats really good. makes me think of friends i used to have. touched me that peice :')
2010-02-10



Oh for real?

Say, that line:
You forgot the not good enough-was the best a week ago!
Ouch and oh my goodness!

I wouldn't want to bt the one on the receiving end of this letter.
One hell of a write with all that has to be said in such a way.
Powerful with a force to be respected.

Thanks 4 the sharing
2010-02-10


Kathy Lockhart
a very powerful piece. I love the repetition until the end. That's where you took your life back.
2010-02-10