IT HURTS

It hurts
But then who would know better then you
It hurts
But then you struggle to believe that its true
It hurts
But your eyes won't allow you to see
It hurts
That today is the end for you and me
It hurts
When you go to bed at night you pray
It hurts
Hoping tomorrow the pain would have gone away
It hurts
To see you go through so much pain
It hurts
Your torn to pieces once again
It hurts




Poetry by nature
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Written on 2010-02-19 at 10:35

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MIK136PARKS
constuctive critiscism melissa not out right put downs just how a text can be improved this text doesnt nedd to be :)
2010-03-04



I Like This,And Jade ... You Dont Critisise Peoples Work :-O That Is NOT How We Do Thing On The Bay
2010-03-04


cohen fox
its called poetry, anything can be poetry as long as its from the heart, if shes emphasing on pain it shows how much pain she was/is in although im not suprised you don't understand, also advertising your poems on other peoples poems isn't the best diea, just a heads up that
2010-03-04


Jaydee x.x
omg how many times do u have to say it hurts
we get it love
oh check out cowboy jim :)
and my poem
2010-03-04


MIK136PARKS
i hurt every day

i hurt myself and others :(
2010-03-03



...and after all is said and done... they hurt!
You've laid down the law here now throw away the key.
Next in line please.
Excellent, ex-cellent! Every hurt doesn't hurt... at least for long.
2010-02-19