well, i started listening to folk music afew months ago, and really loved how the songs told different stories, and how they created pictures in your mind. i tried to do a similiar technique with this.


sir elegance.

My heart keeps on swaying, along with the sea.
Why aren't you the sir elegance you used to be?
My heart keeps on dropping, like leaves off a tree.
Why aren't you the sir elegance you used to be?
My heart beats like a prisoner, begging to be free,
Why aren't you the sir elegance you used to be?
My heart searches like a lock awaiting the key,
Why aren't you the sir elegance you used to be?
My heart keeps on sinking when you're not happy
Why aren't you the sir elegance you used to be?
It's all an illusion, my mind says to me,
But why aren't you the sir elegance you used to be?




Poetry by Rachel :)
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Written on 2010-05-16 at 21:40

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