Demons

Anger consumes the situation
With confusion
And depicting it with a path of no hope
No seeping light at the end of the tunnel
Creating pain
And unwanted grief between us
Creating the demons of
Doubt
Uncertainty
And a lack of faith
Of our friendship
Allowing the dark and manipulative demons
Doubt
And uncertainty
To invade, conquer and twist my thoughts
Into
Were we even that good of friends at the start?




Poetry by Rachy
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Written on 2010-09-21 at 13:17

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night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
Ouch, well described. . . *applause*
2010-09-22


Rob Graber
Ha! I like the rather unexpected ending; the elevated tone suddenly comes down to Earth!
2010-09-21


Libyan Rose
Definitely without faith and trust any friendship will break at the end.
I enjoy it..keep it up
2010-09-21