Two Wrongs



I could smile
Shrug it off
Blame it on your current dramas
Tell myself you didn't mean too...

I could be polite
Nod my head
Ignore what I know you've done
Chat about the weather.....

I could try
Lie like you
But it's not who I am inside, and you
Are not who I thought you were....




Poetry by Purple Phoenix
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Written on 2010-12-02 at 13:18

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John Ashleigh
A shiver runs through my mind - a medley of so many emotions. Pure talent. Thankyou for writing.

Regards,
John.
2011-02-24


Stan Cooper The PoetBay support member heart!
Hi Purp...
Once again your writing brings out the empathy
from your readers...It's a great talent that can
do that...

xxx Stan
2010-12-17



I like your stanza form, it seems natural, seems like the way we think about "could of's," mulling over the options before reaching the right conclusion.

As for chatting about the weather, I bet that was a non-starter.
2010-12-02


countryfog The PoetBay support member heart!
I like this very much . . . the almost casual 'coulds', and then the damning indictment. Well done.
2010-12-02


John Ashleigh
A very emotional poem - I'm sure it will relate to alot of poets. Thanks for sharing, and keep writng!

Regards,
John.
2010-12-02