Lonely

tell me bright eyes
all the things that you see
the hidden lies
the little hooks
as they catch onto your creamy skin
I'm sorry I couldn't help you
your eyes hide disappointment
while mine hold anger
The red lines prove you're scared
while mine prove I'm a failure
Speaking is much harder
when you have nothing to say
but it hurts much more for you
that I didn't even try
So I just wanted to say that I'm sorry
I know its too late
I lost you along the way
can't get you back
but I made a promise to follow you
so don't walk too fast
because I'm plunging head first into dark waters
drowning with you
because being lonely
hurts the most




Poetry by Feiyn
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Written on 2006-03-10 at 23:55

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Mr.Mist
This ws really beautiful. Listening to "wild world" by cat stevens, and reading your poems, almost bring a tear to my eye...
really beautiful...

- Mr.M
2006-03-12


Zoya Zaidi
"but I made a promise to follow you
so don't walk too fast
because I'm plunging head first into dark waters
drowning with you
because being lonely
hurts the most"

You are a find, a discovery!

Today must be my lucky day:
I came to your page!


((((hugs))))

Love, xxx, Zoya
2006-03-12