The spell



You have cast a spell on me,
and I am hopelessly completely lost
and can't get out of the entanglement,
since love compels me to be faithful,
there is no other choice,
the truth of love excludes all other possibilities,
so I am stuck, delighting in it
since it means, I'll never lose your company.
Be with me always, my beloved,
and I will try to never let you down
but on the contrary extol you,
putting down some effort to live up to you,
since you nevertheless will always be
too good for me and always out of reach.




Poetry by Christian Lanciai The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2010-12-21 at 00:33

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ngaio Beck
How I wish I could write of such lovely and hopeful emotion.Alas I travel in this realm bereft of such riches.
Beautiful!
2011-01-14


John Ashleigh
You make joy out of sadness, my friend. You have told a tale of love - and you shouldn't stop there. I'm looking forward to reading more of your literature.

Regards,
John.
2010-12-21



The mind and its many winding roads in search of while finding love in what seems to be forbidden fruit. Having what we think as our dessert before the main course. You really said it all in this poem and my thoughts were as above for you brought this to mind as you shared your world of poetry in an unselfish and kind way. I always love truth and honesty in a poem for that takes tons of courage and expierence. Hats of to ya sir, bravo!
2010-12-21