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NOTE: 2010 12 14  22H24 EST  Forever Never Felt Better 

Forever Never Felt Better

- an attempt at describing it in words...


No words are good enough

to fully explain what it means,

or fully portray the bubble’s

depth that two in love live in.


It’s in a look,

in a gesture

even a smile

or quiet minutes.


It’s also in the appreciations

of the day-to-day little things,

little attentions that bring joy,

and the way of a gentle touch.


When warmth, affection

and equal adoration

unite to form a close bond,

it’s a different kind of whole.


Once, their lives

were complete méli-mélos

with missing or scattered pieces;

some in very dusty corners.


But turned out it was not to be:

them, remaining as the condemned,

‘cause surprise paths intersected theirs

alighting the beauty factor of breathing.


Inevitably, some had tried

to cast a glance of suspicion

on their special chance

to have met so well –  


so far apart, so quickly,

and also, all so very naturally,

but ignoring or denying precious when

it’s gifted to you is just impossible to do.


So, they figured out very early

that nothing more’d be the same.

What was found on that day

was to never be replaced thereon.


And the years keep it growing,

and they’re still loving as tenderly.

Soon their vows they’ll exchange

‘cause they know it’s their forever.


Nothing else feels : as right

or as good as how they’re feeling

when they share their company;

Or as sore when they’re apart.


His eyes on her.

Her eyes on him.

Smiles ear-to-ear:

Mr. & Mrs. C.


They promise to cradle

each other’s heart

with love and gentleness

like then and for the future.


Words by Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2010-12-31 at 11:08

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StillHoppin The PoetBay support member heart!
'alighting the beauty factor of breathing' and 'some in very dusty corners' - your writing is lovely here, and so very joyful. I love this!!


Stan Cooper The PoetBay support member heart!
Absolutely beautiful...too few people experience that kind of
forever love

xxx Stan

Zoya Zaidi
This feeling is special
It is forever,e
ven if you are not together in future
the feeling will remain forever,
So cherish it,
'Cause it is divine!

I am so happy for you Fiine!


Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
This is beautiful and lifts my heart. May I say, with a smile from ear to ear :D j'ai beaucoup aimé :-)

vladimir todor turmanev
Beautifully written. You've been fortunate to have known these feelings.

Zoya Zaidi
A complete description of arduous love! Nice to see you so happy!

jenks The PoetBay support member heart!
Reading this on New Years Eve has put me in a wonderful place :)
I love the clarity here.
We need to hear more from you.
Happy New Year!
In fact happy everything!

Linda x

Amen! :-)

If I wasn't in a Fine Mood when I began this, I certainly am now!

Happy New Year! (heureuse nouvelle année?)