Doreen Cavazza
A rare gem. So little words, yet so much expressed. It reminds me of childhood--climbing trees, skinning knees and laughing with dear friends. So far, I enjoy your work very much.
2011-04-10

Hans Bump
It seems to me that in Haiku, there is complexity in simplicity. I mean the format seems simple but it's not and you have a lot to say here.
I also think that the interpretation that this you
(or whoever it's about,) is a tomboy is fatally stereotypical.
I think the poem is about a person, not just a woman who's a tomboy. We all have a duality.
I can "hang with the girls" sometimes and I'm not particularly feminine.
Anyway, hope I didn't overthink this. Nice work and thoughtful. I can appreciate it. I'm not very good at haiku.
Keep writing!
2011-03-20

Lawrence Beck
I always loved those girls, and I feel lucky to have raised one.
2011-02-13

Rob Graber
At risk of sounding disloyal to my gender, I'm tempted to call it slumming...
:-,?
2011-02-12

This image nagged at me until it hit me: this could be "Anybodys" the tomboy character from West Side Story.
2011-02-12

countryfog
Speaking from experience, tomboys make the best girlfriends, whether you're ten or thirty.
2011-02-12