Fade away

As you watch me fall
Ive lost it all
I shrink away as you stand tall
I cannot crawl
broken doll
You won't even answer my call

AS I FADE AWAY TO nothing




Poetry by Feiyn
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Written on 2006-03-14 at 01:09

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Zoya Zaidi
Absolutely orignal style and approach!
Very, very charming!
I like the part:
"I shrink away as you stand tall
I cannot crawl
broken doll"

There is at once pathos and irony in it!

(((((HUGS))))

Love,xxx, Zoya
2006-03-14