I am

the rain falls in a tempo
I follow with my feet
Draped in crystal droplets
dressed only in white sheets

The lightning gives me light
as the thunder sings in my ear
and the music plays for me
I am powerful and without fear

If you see me dancing
I know what you will say
But do not judge my character
by what you see today

I am who I am
don't tell me who to be
I am grateful that I can sing and dance
with the rain that will come for free









Poetry by Feiyn
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Written on 2006-03-14 at 01:33

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Rune Ljungberg
In my opinion nice going Feiyn.
2006-03-15


Zoya Zaidi
Dance and dance away my dear,
Dance into the rain,
The raindrops will kiss your cheeks,
There thunder will give you strength,
The sorrows of your heart will disappear,
Along with the falling rain!
Give full reign to your feeling of joy today,
For joy also comes free of cost,
Just as does the rain!

You write so beautifully!

Your joie de vi-vre just pours out of each line,
Just as the diamonds of your words fall like rain drops on the senses.

Bravo Feiyn!

Love, xxx, Zoya
2006-03-15