Carvel Cake in April When My Birthday's in March

A surprise ice cream birthday cake,
Like revenge,
Is a dish best served cold.

Words by Nancy Sikora
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Written on 2011-04-25 at 04:39

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Hans Bump
The title is the frosting on top. Umm good.
Happy Birthday, Nancy ( Whoops! It's July )
Hope humor takes some of the sting out of it.

Doreen Cavazza
So few words, so much impact and meaning behind them. Very well done.

Stan Cooper The PoetBay support member heart!
Hi had better be served cold, as it must
have been in the freezer, considering it was served
a month late..

good write, Nancy...

but I love birthday cakes whenever they're served

And, I'll betcha, mine would have a lot more candles
then yours

xxx Stan

josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
I love it!
Deliciously inventive.
with just a touch of sour.


John Ashleigh
You make me think deep, Nancy. A colourful write. Thankyou.

vladimir todor turmanev
Not only is your writing clever and inventive,but now has become appetizing as well.

I find this highly entertaining. I immediately wonder why a month late, and start to develop different, outrageous scenarios.
Very provocative Nancy. Anything that can stimulate the diabolical side of my imagination is a pleasure!