just a poem...


a king

the king takes a bow and he laughs,
laughs at what he sees ...
he sees some tiny toys and really likes it.
the king is smart and funny, and crazy detached...
he seems stupid but he is not ..
they have him dressed in bizarre clothes
because he is bizar to them...
and someone said "do not do that, do not lean! "
but he did not listen.
the laughter dissapears after hearing that voice ;
the king is transformed into a second;
face gets serious ,
mouth remains silent ,
eyes become sad...



Poetry by anton roxana
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Written on 2011-06-27 at 12:39

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Kee Zealy The PoetBay support member heart!
What makes your poetry special, is that you do not try to overwhelm with language. The word choice and images are very vibrant, and it takes us as the reader to the place you are describing.

Your images and discriptions are unique to you as a writer. Your style is unigue to you, and that is what good writing should be, unique to your feelings and experiences. There is no pretense or an attempt to be someone else. That has more value than you know.
2012-04-30


John Ashleigh
Congratulations on the editors choice award - this poem deffinately deserved it. Thankyou for sharing.

Regards,
John.
2011-07-04


Editorial Team The PoetBay support member heart!
This text has been chosen to be featured on the front page of PoetBay. Thank you for posting it on our poetry web site.
2011-07-01