To die would be an awfully great adventure

to die would be an awfully great adventure

with judgment day and clouds

and god to be my tutor

 

to live is the biggest challenge

with work and family

and that hardships in society

 

to die would be an awfully great adventure

to see the clouds and angels

and hear the chior singing

 

i wonder what my heaven looks like

maybe gardens with mazzes 

and roses and daisies

 

to die would be an awfully great adventure

without responsibilites or cares

not a worry to be shared

 

i wonder what the moments like

when you die and life

leaves you body cold

 

to die would be an awfully great adventure

i've had so many loved ones take it

but yet if my time should be tonight

could i make a deal to still wake in the 

morning so to say goodbye?


 





Poetry by montana
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Written on 2011-07-24 at 10:17

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Richard Wilson
Interesting read! I wasn't sure quite how to take the tone of the piece. It's sad yet the piece is based on the point of Hope within death. Nice work :)
2011-07-24