Harmony



Music,

silver notes on

purities edge ring out,

clarity strikes and vibrations

quiver, sound waves resonating golden

tone, the lullaby of my soul

echoes of my past, lets

listen to life's

music.








Poetry by shells
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Written on 2011-08-25 at 00:34

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StillHoppin The PoetBay support member heart!
Beautifully written and displayed, and I'm particularly taken with the language used in the first half of this. The lullaby of your soul is lovely.
2013-04-21


Hans Bump
"silver notes on

purities edge ring out,"


Language and Art at it's most sublime.
Beautiful.
Thank you , shells
2012-01-10


John Ashleigh
I like the movement made by the artistic structuring, and your range of vocabulary is impressive. The feeling here is very potent. I love this. Thankyou for sharing.

Regards,
John.
2011-12-01


Nils Teodor The PoetBay support member heart!
Beautiful in both form and content
Thanks for sharing
N T
2011-11-07


Stan Cooper The PoetBay support member heart!
Listen to classical music,
'cause you write a classic poem

xxx Stan
2011-09-01



Like another commenter, I love the shape of the poem and the way it end with the same word with which it began. Also the silver image followed by golden in the center of the poem. Nice appreciation for the solaces of music.

Regards,
William
2011-08-27


Hans Bump
This poem is what words were meant for.
2011-08-26



Well, shells...
With my friend Ken's recent write, this is Poem of the Day.
I love music, so this resonates beautifully. And the line lengths are perfect, the overall shape resembling perhaps an arrowhead pointing forwards. But let us heed the lullaby tonight as, once more, we hope for peace.
Thanks for this :>)
2011-08-25