The beauty of Being

 

The source is here

 

Like space IT is everywhere

 

One turning and burning diamond

 

alive and present

 

One light

 

shining bright

 

The taste from clarity dissolves

 

the idea of the taster that never was

 

 only the taste of aliveness remains

 

in the beauty of Being

 





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Written on 2011-10-19 at 14:18

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2011-10-21



A very well-observed piece, my friend.
I like especially the 'turning and burning diamond' as it mirrors what happens in my mind when I try to understand the finer points of IT: just a shimmering, gleaming light!
The formatting of your poems always appeals, but here especially in the somewhat hourglass shape.
Applause!
2011-10-19