Louis Constant
Thank you both for comments, I am glad to have stirred at least thought...
And yes you are right words are cheap....

But the best things in life are free!!!

;-)
2011-10-23

jenks
I hope you do
we cannot experience everything we write of ...equally i find it fascinating to research things...
i believe in listening more than talking...sadly words are cheap
2011-10-21

Louis Constant
Thanks.... i think hahaha

You make a good point, although the use of the words blood and bleed we're more an expression of the anger of the person before proceeding....
I do commend your knowledge though and may write a Part 2 after all.... ;-)

Thanks

Louis Constant
2011-10-21

night soul woman
A interesting reading experience. I thought that when you hang yourself there is no blood involved but excessive drooling hm perhaps some drops of blood coming from the nose at the end? Well, I don't know . . . but according to chacha.com the only thing you can achieve when hanging yourself is a one or more fart(s) or whatever there is inside your bowels and if you are male a post mortem erection. . .

From chacha.com "Blood does not come out of the mouth after hanging oneself. The skin becomes tight & gray, then the bowels release."

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Death_erection

Now that you have some more details do you feel like writing a part 2?
2011-10-21

Louis Constant
True... But, was that critique/compliment or just a statement?

It is a piece of poetry though..
not a description of anything real or in particular directly in relation to hoping or choking in reality

But Thanks for the comment
2011-10-21

Louis Constant
True... But, was that critique/compliment or just a statement?

It is a piece of poetry though..
not a description of anything real or in particular directly in relation to hoping or choking in reality
2011-10-21

jenks
Choking is not good for anyone.
Hope is an entirirely different thing.
2011-10-21