re-cycled piece of work.


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paused breath circled vacant heart
blind on the bottle
mind the parting penny spent
making no promise copying window
bleach lips
meaningless approach
sweet nothing delay poured into the grave
frayed blood stained smile
faded photo opportunity



Poetry by Aaron Jon Wells
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Written on 2006-03-22 at 16:05

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Zoya Zaidi
Kind of difficult to follow
The maze of your mind!
But, I am trying hard anyway,
May be some day,
I'll some meaning find?

It makes interesting reading
Even then, dear friend of mine!

(((((Preplexed hugs))))

Love, xxx, Zoya
2006-03-23


Jon Hanover
Free verse, can be tough to review sometimes. From the lines before me they paint a very morbid image. Also one of loss, and sorrow. Good write. Re-cycling or as I like to call it " reworking " can be good at times.
2006-03-22