So

I want
You to do
Something.

Caresses
Sound quite
Gentle.

I smite you
Only till tomorrow.



Poetry by jenks The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2012-01-18 at 01:38

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Blilith
Evocative
Emotional
I love the word smite
Biblical
Love
Blilith
2012-01-18


Hans Bump
Ah , the ebb and flow of desire, sometimes sudden, sometimes evasive.
Your poem is covertly evocative.
I really like it.

Hans
2012-01-18


Brian Oarr
Probably just my perverted mind, but this poem sounds delightfully kinky. :-)

Brian
2012-01-18