Loomed Moon

Your light tonight is hurtful
Looming moon.
No matter how you face us
We live still with darkness
Punctured haphazardly with lights
Of untruth disappointing intrinsically.

I have become so jaded moon...
Let me come back in.

Poetry by jenks The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2012-05-06 at 00:39

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Stan Cooper The PoetBay support member heart!
Hi Jenks...anyone who writes as well as you do, should not
ever feel jaded
xxx Stan

Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
And its answer was?

Moonlight seems to be like that, doesn't it? Unlike the flamboyant sun, the moon makes us pensive and introspective, perhaps because its light is only a reflection of the sun's.

Enjoyed your moon-verses very much.

Loony! Seriously, I liked this, especially the last two lines.