Zoya Zaidi
Beautiful and unique imagery,
Every word is well etched,
Every thought well thought at,
The crossword is so intricately laid,
As I read this, I am simply amazed,
At your artistry, at the skill displayed!

(((((Hugs for an excellent piece of work)))))

love, xxx, Zoya
2006-04-05

Veld Cooper
Sometimes, stuff dredged from the past like this can deliver pure gold. The second verse is absolutely stunning!
2006-04-01

Rik
Cool piece, really good imagery delivering a sense of resignment. Enjoyed the read.
2006-04-01

Troll
(i wish you could just comment with a facial expression... like, say, stunned...)

this is a good write (although "leaving not very quick or soon" feels like saying the same thing 2x)

but the thing in this that really got me was the last verse. there's a power to it, to those dishes on the rocks and the melted dreams (a mental sin, oh there is so much all through it that this poem calls up emotionally)....

all i can say is...

i'll take the red pill (hehehe)

(((((((standing ovation)))))))
2006-03-30