Love


it's true
I did love you
just didn't know
at the time
what love was 





Poetry by Eli The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2012-05-31 at 11:19

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josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
What a wonderfully clear and sensitive retrospective. I often wonder what would have happened to the path of my life if I had known at times the truth of the experiences I was having as a naive and thoughtless man. I suppose we all gain wisdom to some degree as we age but, too late...

Very well written in clear consise phrases. I really love this kind of economy of words which you practice so well.

Joe

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2012-05-31