Beyond trying to be



There is no effort in Seeing


There is no effort in Being


What you are cannot be caught by thought


Truth is not what you think it is


Truth simply



Poetry by Nils Teodor The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2012-06-19 at 11:13

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The first two lines drew me straight into the piece; as they alone speak a valid truth. I found line 3 particularly intriguing and thought provoking, whilst the ending sums up the poem wonderfully direct yet positively so.

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ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
Draw a circle a round what is said to be the truth. Then look from both the inside and the outside. Each degree you look from will you look will tell you a slight different truth.
Ken D ( Williams )