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The Age Of Elizabeth



It was difficult to see you disappear
(swimming waves of utter blue racing past)
appearances of words and things which were,
diving deep inside meanings well deep and full
spreading wings through shades of light we grew,
once there, I held your hand a shining book of soul
casting seeds of grace let go to find their roots in earths
no one else may ever know how far you came just to stay
within reach of the prayers you loved like Heaven's face
never turned a hurt or wounded cry away,
day became beautiful, perfectly clear
Quite impossible to see you d i s a p p e a r .




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Written on 2012-09-13 at 15:45

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Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
Lovely flow, just got swept away to the end. It is very gentle in the way it touches on the pain of loss. Enjoyed, thanks for posting.
2012-10-20


normalil
Although it reminded me of the day the dolphin swam away, I see this as a very sad tale of lost love. Very beautiful, but do remember that there are many more fish, (and mammals) in the sea.
2012-09-15