The summer sun
alters the mood
in your eyes,
the shadows
that were present
just a moment ago
melt away
into the unknown.

High up,
climbing through the clouds,
stalking the skies,
dancing on the wind
like a dragon - I see a kite
bursting with joy,
I imagine it is my heart
set free.

Poetry by Nathalia The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2016-06-07 at 11:32

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A graceful poem, which instills the eagerness to read more, much more, of your work! Well done.

Bibek The PoetBay support member heart!
Lovely. Soft and contemplating. I like the tone of your poem.

Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
How beautiful. Summer emerging can give inspiration to wonderful things. Perhaps it has been a long cold lonely winter.

Kathy Lockhart The PoetBay support member heart!
In the light the truth is revealed and the truth shall set you free. Soar to the heights of Heaven like a kite without strings.
I love the image of the dragon. There is power in the dragon, in freedom, in truth. I love this powerful poem.

Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
Wonderful, a free spirit poem, thank you

Elle x

You set the scene in stanza one and skillfully provide the perfect analogy in stanza two. The soaring kite exemplifies so much. Enjoyed.


Ivan R
A great poem, alive, just great*