i think i heard something

in the loud silence
i think i heard something

could it be you?
clearing your throat

to probably maybe perhaps
say something?



Poetry by Barthoromeopoet
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Written on 2014-02-24 at 14:37

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Rob Graber
Or not? This is a fun little write, reminding me much of a great scene in Dickens' Christmas Carol in which the Ghost of Christmas Present taunts Scrooge along just these lines.
2014-02-24



I read it as the wish for someone missing who is wished to return. Touching.
2014-02-24


night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
*loud laughter*That was funny! :D
2014-02-24