If you had trouble breathing
You would tell me, right?


if you had trouble breathing

If you had trouble breathing
You would tell me, right?

I know I called you last night
Just before you tucked in
Or after

And I called you again this morning
First thing
To check on you
If you had slept well
And woke well
And took breakfast
And brushed your teeth
And to wish you a good day
Full of thoughts of me

We'll catch up later, I'd said
Every five minutes
As often as I can call, text,
Hit you up on whatsapp, g-chat, facebook, twitter

But my favorite is calling you
And always asking
How are you
Where are you
What are you up to
And the never disappointing text
Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii, and
Heyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

No, this is not smothering
It's true love
That you must have

If you had trouble breathing
You would tell me
Right?




Poetry by Barthoromeopoet
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Written on 2014-03-27 at 09:25

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F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
Oh I don't know... I think I'd feel a little smothered if I had a special someone behaving like this...it's a bit much, no? :)

Enjoyed imagining the moment of your descriptions, they were very effective.
2014-03-29



Those are very unsatisfactory calls. She is either very immature or is refusing to come to terms with a problem. Then again, depending on her age, it could be normal behavior. Well written plea for clarity.
2014-03-27