dark timber holds

dark timber holds
a doll a singed totem
smoldering for all to see
pixel by pixel

corridors of present worry
twist intent
forget logic
the madness sore tales provide

timber the foretold
the untold
the upcoming total
of intention




Poetry by Bob
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Written on 2014-10-06 at 22:34

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melanie sue
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2014-10-07



Definitely a trip through emotions. I love the beginning:
"dark timber holds
a doll singed totem
smoldering for all to see
pixel by pixel"

WOW!! Very graphic and highly emotional

This one is a bookmark!
2014-10-07


F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
This sends my thoughts in all sorts of directions each as profound as the next... I struggle to explain it, but know that your words were impactful for me ... as always, a trip through emotions your words evoke... very good - thanks.
2014-10-07