just being silly


The Penultimate Eve:-)

The world is orange
I'm feeling blue
nothing rhymes with orange
so what should I do?



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Written on 2014-10-16 at 22:13

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Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
When orange has no rhyme,
Get rid of it, I say.
Abandon color altogether.
Paint your poem gray.
2014-10-19



:) That's always been the problem for poets who write in English--there are a lot of words with no rhymes. Perhaps you should rewrite the poem in French :). Very entertaining and clever.
2014-10-17



The orange will soon be gone and lots of things can rhyme with blue. Autumn makes me melancholic because I so dread the cold of winter. I like your little rhyme. :-)
2014-10-16