That Taught

The tear that you cried yesterday
Fell in my arms today
I hoped that it wasn't my fault
I could never live with that taught




Poetry by Sinko
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Written on 2005-08-02 at 11:07

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epohonci
i could see it as being (and choose to read it as) 'that taught' as wordplay, and tears can certainly teach... a beautiful write

epohonci
2005-08-02


F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
its been mentionned already for the word "taught", so i wont say it again :) your poem is sweet... when we care for someone, we would want everything to be perfect for them... this is what im thinking with your words here... very nice... thanks for sharing :)

later...xx
2005-08-02


chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
a good poem here, just the typo with the word thought at the end.
2005-08-02