Watching the world and day unfold from my window


Morning

Slowly from indigo to turquoise
The sky exposes the silhouette
The budding branches sway
In the easy morning wind
Another day creeps
In to warm my life
In yet unknown
Exciting treks
On paths of
Serendipity



Poetry by josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2015-04-19 at 13:00

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This is lovely, Joe. I like the careful attention to the lengths of the lines, the silhouettes of the branches, and the optimistic mood of the piece.
Applause!
2015-04-20


Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
Very nice. And an attitude that cannot let you down. Our entire life is serendipitous. Thanks for this.
2015-04-20



How lovely to have this and your poem is a beauty.
I love the structure it fits the scene perfectly:)
2015-04-19


countryfog
Exactly! Just outside my door the flowering crabapple is not yet leafing but is completely filled with pink and violet blooms, beautiful and fragile, some already having fallen and covering the ground beneath it, the sense of how fleeting such beauty is yet something always comes along to replace it.
2015-04-19