F.i.in.e Moods
Absolutely beautiful... as I feel what you mean by these words. The one you write them to is obvious to me that they mean something deep. Very emotive, if not emotional, that's what the words here speak to me. That person is a lucky one to have someone to write such insightful and sensitive words for, is what I say :)
2015-07-03

Jamsbo Rockda
A very beautiful piece. I hope this person takes solace in your fine words.
2015-07-01

A bird with no sky. That's a very powerful image. What would a bird do without the great big blue sky to soar into? Human beings also need places to soar--to rise above the bad experiences that come into our lives. Fine poem about hope and possibility.
2015-07-01

Arunesh dixit
Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing with everyone. Your poem started with life's challenges and then at the end it is finished in a positive tone.
2015-06-30

one trick pony
in whatever form it may come, adversity has the potential to erode love and a relationship; or, it has the potential to make the love deeper, and the healing power of love, though it may be a cliche, is real. i think, though i can't be sure, that your poem is about the latter, about the power of love, to stand by someone in pain, because the love is real and there and meaningful.

i'm sorry if this is vague. i know this kind of love, it isn't easy to put into words.
2015-06-30