sonnet plus one invisible line






i believe han shan and hans hahn

i believe paul, luke, and ringo

i believe alfred north whitehead

i believe the words you write


believe me

when i say

i take, always

one step too many


i mean no harm

i am nearly harmless

and if

you can read between the lines, read this


my heart and my thoughts are 










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Written on 2015-08-04 at 18:58

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Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
Very clever indeed. Don't you think alfred north whitehead looks like Sir John Gielgud? Or am I being silly again? The idea of taking one step too many is so deep. Like counting your breaths.

Ivan R
This poem is like a roller coaster, fun, thrilling and amazing, like a way to say something great, and it does it

I like what you wrote and I think each reader will have to know what is written between those lines. I like the mystery. :)

Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
I'm pretty sure that I see where it goes. I don't know what it says.