on a hot day
painting the exterior of a building
in the city
I like it too. Even the title adds so much to it.
I like this also, I saw another poem about a violin which I really enjoyed, have you removed it? Pity if you have as I didn't have time to comment when I first read it and was hoping to have the treat later on to savour - both are excellent I hasten to add, I like the surreal nature of these and the artwork to compliment
I like this. It's a fine, focused snapshot. It's short, but not mannered and false, as are most haikus.
Each person can form an entire story of what we see. I like that. Well done.
KYREUS of Sweden
such scenes create impressions on mind.. which give joy for long. :) There must be someone at the base of ladder, may be the younger brother or sister holding the ladder.. :)