you were lying next to me, but it was only a dream




when

 

I know that when you leave

it will be 

for the bad things 

 

I know

you see 

 

I don't like them

much 

myself  

 

but when you leave

if you can 

please remember 

the good things too 

 

you know 

I see 

 

they are the things

I like the most about 

myself  





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Written on 2015-10-10 at 16:00

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Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
Nice. It is not much to ask for.
2015-10-14



Aww, they will.
2015-10-11



Good write that makes its point clearly and stirs an emotional response in the reader.
2015-10-11


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
This very nice. It's simple, but gracefully written.
2015-10-11