This was written for a prompt in my creative writing class to write something based off of a stock image (possibly a post card) of a couple walking by a beach.


infinite oceans

we walked hand-in-hand
by the infinite ocean,
though our hands
be clasped tight,
infinite oceans of distance
lie between our destinations

1/12/16



Poetry by Thomas Perdue The PoetBay support member heart!
Read 660 times
Written on 2016-02-01 at 02:13

dott Save as a bookmark (requires login)
dott Write a comment (requires login)
dott Send as email (requires login)
dott Print text


shells
Well done, you have the ability to read between the lines.
2016-02-02


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
As was your last poem, this one is very well paced. It appears as if you're getting something out of this class.
2016-02-01



Very nicely done! The poem surprised me. I through you were going to take the opposite view. Something about how the couple's love had survived the storms, but I like the surprise. :)
Ashe
2016-02-01