| Special In The Head
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2009-09-11
This is fantastic. Made my evening.
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| Unnoticed
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2009-09-11
Interesting
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| Sidewalk Girl, Meet Sidewalk Guy
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2009-06-26
Wow, this is fantastic. Truly the highlight of my literary week. Be proud.
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| Razored Flesh Tainted Red
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2009-06-15
Love that opening line!
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| Killing Kiln Time!
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2009-04-16
I love the excitement in this, like a kid on Christmas morning hoping to sneak a peek! Your passion for what you do is busting through the seams on this one. Well done!
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| A Poem For Him
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2009-04-15
Aw I loved that. Everything's worth one shot. Go at him!
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| Guys = Words
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2009-04-13
Short and beautiful.
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| The avalanche
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2009-03-15
Beautiful
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| Haiku-ish
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2008-08-01
I liked it. I've been studying haiku recently. In English to try to approximate the traditional Japanese form of 5-7-5 (which aren't exactly syllables in Japanese but sound characters) an English poem is closer with a 2 beat first line, 3 beat second, and 2 beat third. English syllables are often longer than their Japanese counterparts so the English poets started shortening theirs to seek that brevity and immediacy. That's a drop in the haiku bucket though! It's such a complex little form. The Haiku Handbook is great if anyone want to really dig depply.
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| Plastic
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2008-08-01
Wow. I love this. "Coz you never took the time - to learn those loving lines" great piece.
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| breaths
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2008-07-12
Very beautiful
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| Echo
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2008-06-13
"Reality is a cruel bandit" great line
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