| Actions speak louder.
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2010-06-21
This is a beautiful poem which I enjoyed reading very much.
"there's no song I can sing
that'll bring justice to your smile.
I've been trying for quite a while
but all I can do is parody your beauty
with dull portraits and cliched phrases."
This part, was my favorite.
You know that there are no words that you can say,
that can compare to her,
yet your still trying.
:) KB
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| Amber
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2010-06-21
Achernar,
I very much liked this poem.
I was definately not expecting the ending
to be the way it was,
but it brought surprise into the writing.
I liked this write very much.
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| She Could..
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2009-07-30
Thats b e a u t i f u l l y written Sarah.
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| Deeper and deeper
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2009-07-30
:)
I love it,
But you already knew that...
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| Leave Me Out Of It
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2009-04-14
How did I know you were going to write something about this whole situation
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| Just for You
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2009-04-02
This is an amzing piece of Writing Sarah. I acctually love it. It is one of those poems that people can relate to as well as seeing how you are feeling.
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| Prince in shining armour, and my honour
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2009-03-25
This is such a good poem courtneyy!
I really love it!
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| Will My World Soon be Yours As well?
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2009-03-23
This poem is soo deep.
So heartfelt.
You write beautifly.
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| Rocks
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2009-03-06
Awweuh, Courtney,
I really love this poem!
And i care,
so Don't say that no one cares
iloveyou my dear.
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| Everything I'll Never Have
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2009-03-03
This is deep,
but I totally understand what your getting at!
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| What were you thinking?
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2009-02-27
My dear, My dear my dear.
I love how you have put this poem into perspective,
because it is basically what we talked about at lunch today.
About how "he" is trying to make you jelous.
I really really like this one.
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| A girls dream of a perfect Valentine!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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2009-02-12
Courtney, I absolutely love this poem!
You hit it right on the head!!
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| Hurt, But I Still Love You
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2009-02-06
You wrote this after what Alex said to you??
Just remeber that
No matter what all happens, I will always be around for you when you need a shoulder to cry on.
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| He wont be there
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2009-02-06
Awwe Courtney.
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| Black tears
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2009-02-03
Courts,
this is an amazing poem.
I absolutely love it.
You have reall talent in this area ...
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| Black tears
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2009-02-03
Courts,
this is an amazing poem.
I absolutely love it.
You have reall talent in this area ...
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| The Dance
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2009-01-26
Ok Sarah, You got real Talent!!
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