Barthoromeopoet

2017-06-15
Vivid illustration.
You took me with you in your words.

2017-04-17
Well written.
Bring's out your brother's undecided state.

2017-04-17
Deep.
Like last moments of the guy walking the plank on a pirates ship.

2017-04-17
You've taken me back to when I was a little boy and was gripped in infatuation once or twice.
Well written.

2017-04-17
Sad tragic love.
The emotions come through clearly.
Hope to come back and find a happy sequel here someday.

2015-10-05
Lawrence Beck, you've saved the day here.
Rob's damning critique seems to find redemption in your observation.
I am a Christian. When I was a little boy I stopped trying to figure out God.
If He exists (I believe He does), where did He come from?
If He doesn't exist... where did we come from???

Back to the topic, Easter?

I believe the biggest culprit is free will.

God created us and gave us free will. Not so that we can do horrible things but so that we can choose to do his bidding out of a free will.

Free will seems to be the most dangerous or potent thing on earth.

2015-10-04
I like it.

2014-11-18
Refreshing read.

2014-10-27
:-)
Lawrence, prophylactic maybe but let's not overdose anyone.

2014-10-23
Ashe, I always love reading your comments!
Thanks.

2014-04-01
can't*

2014-03-31
It's like coming back to a* painting....

Right call on the title.

2014-03-31
I like it.
It's like coming back to painting that was upside down when you first saw it, but did not know it was upside down then.

2014-02-24
Thanks Ashe! Yes, it's like a drug, and you can buy it off the shelf at some pharmacy!

2014-02-11
Awesome.

I must say you have a very vivid style.

*Bartho Romeo.

2014-02-08
Poignant.

2014-02-08
That first line arrests the reader! ~Bartho Romeo